by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop Nov 28, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
The sunshine peeks through, |
Love it! Bout made me cry though! lol! Reminds me of what I use to have |
by Boy
I love the repition. you expressed. "i miss you" |
by Brandy
Aww this is such a sad poem...good...but sad...it is truly touching and coming from the heart...enjoyed it so much |
by Letty
This is another beautiful poem, but sad. This one has a few rough edges with the flow, but the imagery all the same is perfect. I love your style; the way you seem to bring your poetry to life. I am adding you to my favorites. Keep up the great work! |
: ( very sad poem you did a great job with it though 5/5 <33 |