by Christina Nov 28, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Goodbye my almost lover |
by Alexander
It is a good poem all together but not as good as some of the others of yours that i have read. The stanza reapeting got on my nerves slightly but other than that it was good. 4/5 |
by Not
Aww such a sad poem i can relate i was going out with this boy four about 2 almost three years and i moved away far and it was impossible for us to see each other so we had to break up so sad!!...=( |
Awe. this was beautiful and touching. |
by Kaila
Personally I think the one stanza was repeated to much and if you would have only said it maybe twice it would have been a better poem |
by Christina
Awwz thx! |