I enjoyed this piece because I can tell it came from the heart. Some parts were a little shaky, To me the flow was off a bit.

You make me feel special,
You make me feel right.
You know when I'm wrong,
You know when I'm right

I liked the repetition here though the rest of the poem doesn't rhyme this does because of the 2nd and 3rd line.. If it was ment to rhyme then I don't like it that way either because you rhymed the same two words. Other then that this poem held deep emotions. Not a bad poem. ~mel

This poem was very sweet. i didnt see anything wrong with it...
my fav stanza was the first stanza.. i think it made the poem and it pulls the attention in of the reader.. well done

A very sincere words of LOVE...
a sweet expressing those feelings..
a powerful emotions
and great imagery..

5/5

Its good yet unfinished. there could be more.

You have some good emotion in here, I think it is a very sweet write, but the flow was off. The first stanza is fine for me, it read nicely, but the rest could come together nicely with a bit of work. It's a good start though.

WOW, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS ONE.