This is such a sweet poem. It really shows how you feel, and simply too, which is nice. The flow is a bit rocky at times, but for the most part, it was good. I also like that it doesn't rhyme.. shows you can tell your feelings and it can read well without the need of rhyme.
Well done. :]

I don't know what caught my interest since i find it so simple maybe because of the truthfulness... i find if it so sweet because i know it really came from your heart.

The way this is about happy love amazes me.. i mostly read poem about sad love. but i don sence 1 part in here about sad emotion. this poem was very lively wirritin.

This one I like just as it is great gob.

DAMN BABY, I'M LOVIN THESE POEMS OF YOURS!