Time

by N J Thornton   Nov 28, 2007


Time isn't a second,
or a sound, or a movement,
it's where I am and you are.
Time isn't something you can save,
see, or savour;
it passes at a distance -
unnoticed.
Time is my favourite thought
and favourite place to be,
it's where genius creates,
the curious chance
and where you wait
for me.

Inspired by the movie The Lake House.
To be published November 2008.

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  • 14 years ago

    by SeLiNa MaRiE

    Awsome poem! I adore short poems and this one is so sweet. Great job.

  • 15 years ago

    by emad

    I like it soooooo very much it's i'm trying to find the suitable world it's sweet well done

  • 16 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Repetition adds emphasis to a certain word or idea

  • 16 years ago

    by Rob Matt

    Ooh. simple and pretty. the ONLY thing i can say that MIGHT be not good and can be improved is "favourite" is used twice in a sentence, so its kinda repetitive (which isnt the purpose here like alliteration or anything). besides that its really good and i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by killcupidxoxo

    It was pretty good, very deep and so true, keep it up

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