Choke On Your Last Dying Word

by Jenni Marie   Nov 28, 2007


Disdain hissing like fire within my tone
Watching you knot yourself in further deceit
Poisoned words slipping from your mouth
Are you aware of how much I despise you?

It's tangled stories you're spinning
Rolling my eyes as you trip yourself up
Even you can't keep your lies straight
So how do you expect others to believe you?

Whispering "It will be our little secret,"
How many people do you mumble that to?
Unintentionally formed yourself a hate club
Don't you realize how many people detest you?

No, of course you don't, do you?
For you're living in your own fantasy world
But I'm afraid that sooner or later darling
You're going to crash back into reality hard

Who's going to be there to stop your fall?
Do you truthfully believe anyone will help?
For I'm hoping you'll land very painfully
Just so I can revel in your destruction

Just yet another psychotic pathological liar
That's all that you've become, all that you are
Wrap yourself up even tighter in those knots
But excuse my laughter when you finally choke

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, wow...
    This is amazing, Jenny, I truly love it! Brilliant word usage through the whole piece and effective, original atmosphere within every stanza.
    This is my new favorite from you. I'm impressed. This contains so many excellently expressed emotions, and I can relate to this in so many ways.
    Fantastic, endlessly powerful dark piece.
    Keep writing!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost in Life

    Sarcasticly rude lol that sums it up anyway this was really good and the last few lines was the best it was a great choice of words and nice way to end it

  • 16 years ago

    by fearose

    When I read this, I think "hot" for some reason. ^^ Very powerful. I love it. 5/5

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