How will I KNow

by Sweet lig   Nov 28, 2007


How will I know that you really love me?
You said I changed your life through the years
I'm only the love of your life till the very end
The only one girl in your diamond heart

But how will I know that this is all lies?
That this is all the games of your love
That you just has the foolish heart
And breaks my innocent feelings

How will I know that you're real?
If I cant see how you love me?
You cant even promise anything
And u still cant prove me your love!

How will I know that you don't ever hurt me?
That you don't ever leave me! And .
How will I know all the feelings on me
If you still not here with me...

i just did this poem just now and it was from the contest actually i dedicate this to someone and i don't think so if it was good because i just did it right away. anyway thanks!

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  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    So great the way you say how i will know every time , this makes me keep searching to know

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem starts good. The continuem of this poem is a little weak. Again I don't see much rhymes, the meaning fades a little through the poem. The choosing of words could be better and the flow cuts in the middle. A nice piece though 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by chind

    The emotion in this poem was also great.
    i liked how you used to questions to start the stanza "how will i know"
    it was great.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Emily

    I really like this one also. it liked the flow and i can relate to it! another good poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    How will I KNow =know

    I liked the emotion expressed in this poem, however to me the flow was off and rocky. I think if you concerntrate more on the flow and grammer then your poetry would improve muchly. Again emotion is beautifully sweet, with sadness within. Good effort. 4/5 ~Mel

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