by Blissful
I loved the true and real emotions you expressed here. The flow was great and the imagery was wonderful. The questions you asked are ones I have asked before so I could relate. Well done *5/5* |
by Abu3li
It's wonderful, specially the feelings of speclations. |
This poem is really sweet and sentimental. I love the way you express the sweetness in this love poem!!! By the way, it's 5/5 without a doubt!!! |
by Christina
Good job! i liike it! |
by Men
Again the raw emotion was so strong and vivid, my reading got faster and faster when i read this it was wonderful. |
by Blissful
Okay I am going to be honest ... I do think the flow was rocky and lines seemed forced. There were some places I was lost because the words you used did not make sense. I advise you to read over your poem and all the mistakes will become clear and once you fix them, this poem will be beautiful. |
Thats a good question. how will i know? lol anyway i liked this one. there are a lil tweaks you need to fix though but i liked it |
by Kaila
I thought it was okay I think of this more as a rough draft I' would go back look at it and try to rewrite it into something new it really helps improve your skills |
by Melpomene
How will I KNow =know |
by Emily
I really like this one also. it liked the flow and i can relate to it! another good poem! |
by chind
The emotion in this poem was also great. |
by Shinobi
This poem starts good. The continuem of this poem is a little weak. Again I don't see much rhymes, the meaning fades a little through the poem. The choosing of words could be better and the flow cuts in the middle. A nice piece though 4/5 |
by noha
So great the way you say how i will know every time , this makes me keep searching to know |