This is awesome. I love your writing style

First of all you have some copy-past errors in first two lines you should correct that, because it is easier to read poem without that things.

I enjoyed in every line, amazing poem! Honestly I really like it, atmosphere that you created is so original and truly excellent. I think that it could be a little longer, and that you could add a few more metaphors but anyway well done!
Ending line is so good and it add so much effect to the rhythm of whole piece, also I am impressed with second, my favorite, stanza.
You expressed emotions on a great way. All in all I really love this poem.

Great poem! i love the emotion and intensity that it had in it! im sure a lot of people can relate to it.. im going through a time right now wiht my cuzin cutting herself.. and it kinda helps to read poems about it, so i can understand. thanks for sharing! it was really amazing! :D

Wow...
Very powerful from the beginning to the end and truly effective. I can relate to this.
Great piece, filled with sadness, very vivid and descriptive.
My favorite part is:

-I strive to have the feeling of many things
There is nothing left for me here, yet life is still holding me up by my puppet strings-

Keep up!

They are good to read.. Honestly, it's really good. keep it up wit everything u got

I love this poem! It's really good! =] <3...keep writing...

The idea behind this poem is good and strong here are some tips to improve it: work on the flow make your lines have almost the same syllabal(sp?) count. Have it a little longer.
there are a few tips nice job
4/5

This poem is really good. i like it. you officially made it to my favs

This is a really good piece, the emotions was just like wow and the end was just so sad, it really got me
good job
ali x

Great poem.

Good poem. short and good

A very well written poem. The emotion was deep and I liked the last stanza the best. I hope that this isn't true. Very well done. 5/5 for sure.

Ciao<3

I really like this poem. your rhyming was really unique. keep up the good work.

Thanks for the comment..i really like your poems as well

I liked the bit about people telling you how things will get better; slowly they will... but you have to make it happen sorta thing... but it's just so annoying hearing that from other people because they make it sound so easy!!!
Nice poem;
5/5

Wow that poem was awesome. I love the way you wrote that. A very powerful piece.

-Allie

This is a great poem.. I really liked it..! It really shows how you're feeling.. :)

I love your writing its amazing

I enjoyed it very much it is a very strong poem.

I must say....this one was pretty good! I was hooked, and couldn't stop reading it! ^_^