Comments : Upon Natures Path

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    What a brathtaking nature masterpiece!!!! This is beauty beyond words Kay!!!!

    I love the imagery and word choices....
    'The leaves of gold from autumn's tint
    Had dyed their tresses lovely mint"

    ^ perfectly captures the fading Winter as the new fresh leaves emerge.....

    "Velvet blades caught acorn tears
    Solitary comfort through barren years"

    ^so.....beautiful...this couplet is amazing!

    "Furry friends have come and gone
    Spent seedlings they have feasted on"

    ^what a lovely way of wording this....I'm so in awe of this poem....

    "Pinched myself to wake from sleep
    To realize truth of masterpiece
    For beauty of true nature lies
    Not in your dreams, but in your eyes"

    ^...and in my eyes this is by far your best......awesome....beautiful perfect....a perfect 5/5 on any site!!!! BRAVO!!!!!!

    Take care, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Absolutely breathtaking!!!... the awesome wording of this piece brought on wonderful Imagery..

    "For beauty of true nature lies
    Not in your dreams, but in your eyes"

    How very true your words are.. The whole piece was fantastic!!.. and this ending was perfect!!!..

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Furry friends have come and gone
    Spent seedlings they have feasted on...

    I loved these lines, hehe.. I have a friend who is also a member of RTVW and I call him furry friend, so...this made me laugh!
    The poem is beautifully crafted, you picked such beautiful words to express yourself.

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Kay ..
    You have painted a picture of mind-blowing beauty with your words here my friend!

    For beauty of true nature lies
    Not in your dreams, but in your eyes
    ^^^

    Not only have you created images so remarkably vivid within my mind but you've added a message of truth.

    Through your eyes ... to this lovely verse .... I see the beauty before you.
    Awesome read Kay !

  • 16 years ago

    by Fran

    Some unique and striking imagery here. Like Hellon I also loved the lines:
    The leaves of gold from autumn's tint
    Had dyed their tresses lovely mint.

    Highly evocative. Great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    I like your style. You take your poetry to another level of visualizing things. Great poem. 5/5
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully penned. I love the style and your word choice. Your imagery paints nature pictures in the readers mind. (Well at least in mine it does ( LOL!)) Excellent job! 100/10. This is one you can read over and over! ~~~~~~~~~~~applause~~~~~~~~~~~~

  • 16 years ago

    by Jeff

    Loved it.Well done.You got five from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Your poets heart unfurls itself willingly and lends its words to us to float and drift among our own words. Good work, I enjoyed your poem and look forward to more.

  • 16 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    I enjoyed reading this lovely poem, great descriptions at every turn on the trail. Dreams are good but seeing presents mesmerizing moments to remember.
    Peace and Blessings

  • 16 years ago

    by Tony Rifas

    This was an absolutely breathtaking read!

  • 16 years ago

    by Corinne

    Another lovely. I'm particularly drawn to nature poems. I love:

    Limbs without falter held each nest
    Sheltered rain from feathered guest

  • 15 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    A beautiful ode to Nature. Yes, beauty is there before our eyes, and within! Love the last two lines.