What We Had! <3
by Christina Nov 28, 2007
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As we grow older.....everything seems to change. When you look back on the past. It makes you cry. You didn't realize how great it really was. And you think of somethings you wanted to do. Like kiss HIM! But you were too scared to. Why were you so scared to? You knew he loved you back. Was it because you had never kissed someone before. Was is because you didn't want to mess up. What ever was holding you back at the time you wish hadn't. Now you pass him in the hallway. You guys are both friends but in your mind you wish you guys were more. Every time the clock says 11:11 you make a wish that you and him could have a second chance. If only it would come true. But it seems every time you make that wish it seems that it's actually getting farther from that chance. You won't forget all the memories you and him share. And either will he. You still listen to your song....and it seems to make you cry even harder, but you cant help but listen to it. You go to sleep thinking of him. And you wake up thinking of him. All day you day dream about him and what you guys will never have again. |
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16 years agoby Not
You still listen to your song....and it seems to make you cry even harder"- yes when slow songs play and its about good relationships i get pissed a little cus it remind me of my ex he basically i wish god would have never created becus it was too many months of a waste but anyways i ca relate to this poem and mostly that line!!!....=).....Good work!!
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16 years ago
It was a very emotional piece. Good choice of words. But, there were grammatical errors, and the style of this didn't help much. Maybe if you put this into stanzas, it would look better. 3/5
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16 years ago
by Mollie
Nice poem... only thing is that you might want to break it up in stanzas... i big block of words is overwelming for some people to read. I love it keep it up!
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16 years ago
This experience is always depresssing.
it's happened to mehh once. and only once.
b/c i refuse to let it happen again. "/
there are so many things i regret.
he came for a kiss. but i was scared. so it never happened.
hez moved away now. and while he was here.
we only got together once. and it ended tragically.
but now he's told mehh he did like mehh.
but just. .nothing could happen b/c of his friends.
but he says he wouldve changed that.
and now everyday i have to wonder. .
about what couldve been. "/
good write. 5/5. -
16 years ago
by KJ
Another good one. I liked the usage of vocabulary in this one better though. 5/5
PaSsIoNaTe KiSsEs
