Christmas Time

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Nov 28, 2007


Christmas time is coming,
Better get ready for that day.
Time to start buying presents,
Time to make dinner plans.

Parents running around the mall,
Trying to figure what to buy their family.
Kids making decorations at school,
For their Christmas tree at home.

Couples start making dinner plans,
Before it is too late.
Grandmothers making cookies,
Enough for everyone in the family.

Families at home decorate their trees,
That signify a little something of their past year.
Everyone has a great time at doing it,
Not giving a care of what they do.

Christmas is unforgettable,
No matter what age you are.
It is the happiest season of the year,
That everyone will remember the rest of the year.

*Cindy Lopez*
*Nov. 28, 2007*

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  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    I LOVED THIS ONE MRS. LOPEZ!

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I like the premise behind the poem, but the flow was a little off for me, a little change here and there to tighten up your lines would help, it was a nice read though, good job and thanks so much for entering it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    I would rework this one too. The point of the poem is good, the flow is weak. But like i said before every one has their own stile.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I liked this one! Christmas time is my absolute favorite time of the year so I can totally relate! there were only a few rocky spots like:
    like stanza 3 line 1
    otherwise wonderful job...
    5/5 =]
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem was a really enjoyable read. i can sence the happiness through the whole poem. and evertything worked together very well in this poem. keep up the good work

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