This is the best of the three, my darling.
I believe that you just had more . . . rhythm with this poem.
Like, it didn't seemed force and it was described well.
There were a few parts that might need worked on, bu toverall you did wonderfully with this. (:

This poem was a really enjoyable read. i can sence the happiness through the whole poem. and evertything worked together very well in this poem. keep up the good work

I liked this one! Christmas time is my absolute favorite time of the year so I can totally relate! there were only a few rocky spots like:
like stanza 3 line 1
otherwise wonderful job...
5/5 =]
kaila

I would rework this one too. The point of the poem is good, the flow is weak. But like i said before every one has their own stile.

I like the premise behind the poem, but the flow was a little off for me, a little change here and there to tighten up your lines would help, it was a nice read though, good job and thanks so much for entering it.

I LOVED THIS ONE MRS. LOPEZ!