Lets Go Back! <3

by Christina   Nov 28, 2007


Lets go back
back to when everything
everything was perfect

lets go back
back when you would
would protect me

lets go back
back when there
there was me and you

lets go back
back before we
we gave each other something

lets go back
back and realize we shouldn't
shouldn't have done that.

lets go back
back when we loved
loved each other!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    The repeating kind of through off the vibe for me
    I felt as though this poem was a little forced
    honestly you've done a lot better in more recent poems
    which means you are growning as an artist
    so kudos to you!
    I still enjoyed it somewhat
    3/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    As I read your work I think that you are saying the same words, using the same style, writing about the same thing. There isn't a big variety as others have. Your ideas behind the work is great just put more time and effort.

    Amber :]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Im So OVER IT

    I really like your poems. they are all awesome. I liked this one alot. keep on writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    I love how you repeated some of the words I never saw a poem like that and if I did I bet It wouldn't be as good as yours...=)

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Well, there's not much I can say about this poem. It wasn't that good. I think the repetition made it look bad. 3/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

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