Thx!

Ohh i enjoyed the u repeat the (back) word. love the emotions also and all the lines.. i think its great and u had done a great job well done! 5/5

I really really like this one.
I wish we could go back in time sometimes.
But then i wouldnt be with the man that im with. Great job hun.. keep it up.

Well.
i think the stanzas in this should have been a little longer and a little bit more detailed. and when u reused the word at the end of the sentace for the next one, it kinda through me off a bit. but overall it was an enjoyable poem

The style you used here was different and unique but you made it work. I do think you could expand on your vocabulary and add some more imagery to bring it too life. *4/5* from me.

This was nice.
short and sad. 5/5.

Nice poems, i really enjoyed it but there is only one problem, on the third line of the forth stanza, you forgot to put the "d" in shouldn't...but other than that, i think the style was very unique and very creative... 4/5

I love this poem... i can really conect to it too, only one thing is that i think one of ther theres in this stanza shouldn't be there, maybe a different word or somthing (just a thought)

lets go back
back when there
there was me and you

its still great how it is though
keep it up
mollie

Well, there's not much I can say about this poem. It wasn't that good. I think the repetition made it look bad. 3/5

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I love how you repeated some of the words I never saw a poem like that and if I did I bet It wouldn't be as good as yours...=)

I really like your poems. they are all awesome. I liked this one alot. keep on writing

As I read your work I think that you are saying the same words, using the same style, writing about the same thing. There isn't a big variety as others have. Your ideas behind the work is great just put more time and effort.

Amber :]]

The repeating kind of through off the vibe for me
I felt as though this poem was a little forced
honestly you've done a lot better in more recent poems
which means you are growning as an artist
so kudos to you!
I still enjoyed it somewhat
3/5
kaila