Awww. Wow. I will say that this one was not as widely related as the first one, but this one is a lot deeper when it comes to emotion. The methaphors you used were wow. I don't know how you do it, but your great at it. I felt your love for her with every word and I am glad you finally found that one.

My favorite line or whatever was
"I can still remember the day I lost my heart, and not only was my heart lost, it was trampled into little pieces and scattered into various locations like Easter eggs."
^^ Amazing metaphor as well as words. Great job!

Amber..

I really enjoyed this:

"Just because we've smelled the sweet aroma of love, picked up it's scent like a dog and chased it until we could chase no more, does not mean we've tasted it. Many things smell good, like a scented candle or even my aunt's cooking, but you'd know once you bit into it that the taste was far different from what you thought it was going to be based upon smell alone."

I thought that was a great, creative way to explain the sensation, and it worked quite well. : )

Beautiful. Only one word to describe it, Beautiful. Fantastically constructed. Once again, well done. Keep up the good work
5 / 5
Nicole xx

Amazingly written
felt the intense emotion every word
may God truly bless you :)
take care

This is beautiful!! =)

You are a great writer and you have an amazing way with words and describing what your feeling..

My heart will forever be lost with yours, but how could you ever be truly lost in a place you'll forever call home.

I loved the ending. It was a perfect ending and I love the way you wrote it. I'm seriously speechless after reading your stuff. Simply amazing. Keep writing and I will keep reading. =)

btw - long time, no talk. How've you been? lol

OMG I LOVE THIS POEM SO MUCH IT IS SO TRUE HOW YOU EXPLAIN THINGS YOU LEFT ME SO SPEACHLESS THE WAY YOU SAID ALL OF THIS IN YOUR WAY..!!! WOW IM LIKE SO WOW!!! LOL....THIS IS A GREAT POEM!!! KEEP UP THE AWESOME JOB!!! AND THIS POEM IS SO ONE OF MY FAVORITE!!! WELL TAKE CARE!!! AND AS I CAN SEE YOU FOUND YOUR LOVE AND WELL I WISH YOU DA BEST WITH HER TREAT HER RITHT WHICH I KNOW YOU WILL!! U SEEM HAPPY KEEP THAT UP!!!! WELL TAKE CARE ALWAYS
~ME~ BIANCA

This was really good. Most of your love poems are but I think this one tops them. No fancy words and pretty metaphors, just the truth. I wish more people could write this way. So many depend on big words and imagery that they lose the meaning of their poem behind all that stuff. This was simple but also brillant. Very well done :) Nik