Great poem. shows real emotion. 5/5

Very good write. I loved your play on words in this poem and at the same time you showed great emotion. I can easily relate to this one, and honestly, I think that every does once in a while. The part I liked best was:
"so you stay quiet in your own little world
absent minded you don't say a word
afraid that if you speak you won't be heard"
...yea, that part was really good. The best part to me. Keep up the good writings! 5/5

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This is such a good poem it kinda reminds me of myself

I like this poem of yours, it's different but it's also really influential to others. I think that you did a good job and I do like the closing notes.

-M

I loved it! You really captured the haunting, deep and lonely emotion of depression. Not wanting to be bothered by anyone, no zest for life ... things I could once relate with. Beautiful job in describing your emotions. Well done *5/5*

Dude, this poem is awesome, i bet a lot of people can relate to it... i love it!!

Very meaningful. i like the way you see things and express them in your writings!!