Damn, this is so sad. =[
I kinda know what you feel because I was somehow like this for someone i really liked. great job!!! 5/5

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Now this one, I loved. So beautifully written with an both an awesome flow and word choice. The way you wrote this was perfect, I couldnt take my eyes away. The emotion is strong, an amazing piece. Good work, and keep writing!!