Last tear to fall tonight

Wow...you write with such strong and clear emotions. This poem really touched my heart. There are so many great things about this poem that make it so beauiful. Very nice work my friend. Nik

Oh now thats what i called talent. IMAGERY- absoloutey spot on, great adjectives, great lanuage skills, the image of the little girl and boy, is dark, eerry and sad all at the one time, so you got the emotional bit into the poem too.

she yells out loud in the blankness
it echos back as rumors and lies- thats one strong line, right there and how true it is, it reminds me of something a friend of mine said a very long time ago. thats no matter what she says, no matter what she screams into her pillow all alone, it comes back as decite and lies.

Oh my this has to be my fave from all the ones I read! It was so heartbreakingly sad where I could see myself in your words. Your use of descritpions and details truly brought the poem to life for me. Well done *5/5*

Nice imagery
i loved this poem
it spoke to me
because I can relate
somewhat
this was excellent
better then some of your latest
5/5
kaila

Another unexpected one. I loved the part:
"she yells out loud in the blankness
it echos back as rumors and lies"
The word choice is excellent. I loved this poem! ^.^