Wow Deb this is fantastic!!!..

"Last shot at love, have I found love at last?
Pain for so long, can't get over the pain
Past regrets linger, still color the past
Again the tears fall, ink smudging again"

A very powerful poem full of heartfelt emotions.. such beautiful wording through out the entire piece. This stanza for me knocked me off my chair lol.. the hope and desire felt in this piece was simply breathtaking.. The ending said it all for me..

"Chance of this meeting, slim to no chance
Dance with love's feelings, my turn to dance"

What a awesome job you have done on this style of poetry.. Well Done!!!

Debbie,

You are so gifted...I just love your style.
You rock!!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Gosh darn lady the more I read your work the more I love it.
As my first introduction to a Shadow Sonnet I must say it will certainly leave a lasting impression in my mind ...
Well onward to the poem ....

Well the title certainly fits the poem to a tea ..

Last shot at love, have I found love at last?
Pain for so long, can't get over the pain
Past regrets linger, still color the past
Again the tears fall, ink smudging again
^^^
This part is definitely a heart jolter .... such heartfelt words ...

Again the tears fall, ink smudging again
^^^
Awesome line!

Chance of this meeting, slim to no chance
Dance with love's feelings, my turn to dance
^^^
I can't think of a better closing for this piece ...

And I love how you changed your thought within ...
Wonderfully penned Debbie!

Thats is awsome i've never seen anything like it i luv it, this kind of poem has intriged me thanku, and i must say you did it well and it seemed to flow so naturally, great poem xox sam

Come dance with destiny...... with me

Beautiful as always xx

Very Good! 5/5 for me!

Very impressive!
Never heard from a Shadow Sonnet before.
But I think you did a fantastic job!

I really love the and..
" Chance of this meeting, slim to no chance
Dance with love's feelings, my turn to dance "

Just beautiful
Loved reading this piece
Take care

First off I would like to thank you for joining the contest,
This is a very good shadow sonnet debs,
It followed perfectly, and the flow twas excellent,
I give it a 5/5!!!

Awesome and well written. 5/5