Lmao...this cracks me up. I love this, when i read the instructions for this style i thought it would be kinda difficult to fit a humourous verse in such a small space, but you make this look so effortless and easy, while managing to paint such vivid imagery and create a perfect flow at the same time..Beautiful!

Teehee! This made me smile! Toasted bunny... yumm.... :]
5/5

Lol
I love this... it truly made me smile. Great poem, and really excellent job with this form (I tried to write this, but it didn't work lol)

Great work. You took such a juvenile scheme and used it maturely without losing the fun aspect.
{5/5}
[PygmyPuff]

Lol...How did I not ever read this one?

Funny as always my dear Tim.

Hmmm I kinda expected better from you, but mildly amusing. I see you are in right now, yet havent wrote a new poem in almost a year??? whats up?

My latest poem as you and Holly Armer listed in it