Comments : Slipping..falling..going...gone.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brie Anna

    Beautifully written loved it keep up the good work

    *~*bee*~*

  • 16 years ago

    by manic moments

    Tripp... where ever you get these words, these stanzas [e.g.

    Simulated emotions and artificial visions
    personality fractures and mental collisions
    Waging a war on the battlefield of my brain
    Insanity looming over conquering the sane ]

    i would kill to know. teach me?

    perfection kiddo, always is from you

    niquee x♥x

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Love it. i love how you use such big words and it sounds so great. this is just amazing