I love this...I find this to be both original and unique in concept, and while filled with so much melancholy it still makes for a beautiful read.

"Shattered dreams and battered wings
Take away these haunting things"

^^Favourite lines, easily. I don't even know what I could say that would even begin to sum up how I feel about those lines..just beautifully done, and with so much heartfelt emotion that they tug right on my heartstrings.

The ending was so sad and filled with so much grief and misery and yet so wonderfully written..as was the whole piece.