I need you

by Abu3li   Nov 29, 2007


I need your reply

Never thought it would hurt this much.
Never thought I would miss your touch

Three days not hearing from you
I don't have an idea or a clue

I can't bear another day
Please don't treat me this way

I'm feeling down, sad and mad
Trying to hold myself but I can't

Are you avoiding me
Are you too busy

Just give me your reply
Or it would be easier to die

Now I'm so obsessed with you
I can't think of losing you

So just tell me what to do
Shall I live or die, it's up to you

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer

    I love it. very well done. i think in some way everyone can relate to feeling this way about something. you did a really good job showing your emotion. keep up the good writing! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Nawa

    So touching and sad !! Well done.
    The last part was amazing.

    "So just tell me what to do
    Shall I live or die, it's up to you "

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    A very heartfelt piece...
    I could feel the emotions all through the poem...
    very emotional and very well described

    "So just tell me what to do
    Shall I live or die, it's up to you "
    ^^ loved it...very powerful lines..

    Excellent job..

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    The last couplet its strong i like it
    its simple but blunt and gets the poinrt across
    its also well written

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Nice poem..goodluck..hope she'll realize what wud it be wituout you in her life...--->(her Gurdian)

Read All Comments (18)

More Poems By Abu3li