by hope
It's sad but a good poem |
by pookiengurgi
Emotional...well worded apology...sad...I hope if you wrote this for someone they accepted it and forgave you...with this,how could they not?wonderful! |
by Birgit
Strong! Nicely done. The sorry's actually don't bother me, I thought they would because there are a lot of sorry's in this poem, but nope.. it didn't. So nice work |
by Crystal Gaze
It flowed really well, and the emotions were clear. I could almost picture someone on their knees begging for forgiveness with this poem. |
by kate
This is really sad but well spoken. |
by kate
This is really sad but well spoken. |
by Christina
I rele love it!!! 5/5 great job! keep it up! |
by Miu
Aww so sad, emotional, but very cute same time. I hope that the person forgiven to you, this really shows how much you care. Touching! |
by Sweet lig
That was so simple thoughts..and very well expressed |
by Whitney
Thanks for the comment..i love this poem...good job |
by Teria
Whoa, I love it. |
This is deeply touching and filled with emotions, it sound so sincere, like it's written straight from the heart. Captivating poem, filled with equal amounts of sadness and beauty. |
by Lecrissa
Not my faverit form of poem writing, But the poem was good. Keep writing. L. S. Moore |
Awe. the ending was beautiful. |
I love it! <3 |
by heartbreaker
Wow!! i cant imagine the person you wrote this for. this poem might be short but its soo painful to read sorry every line. its like you are telling the reader, that you are a mistake. You are not! Dont ever feel that way. KEEP EXPRESSING! youre poems is like a high! :D sasha |
by shamvi
Simple and a nice way 2 tell sorry... |
AMAZING! your such a talented writer!! keep writing or else i would have nothing to do on here so keep it up so i can read more!! |
by Meme
Its so simple |
by Bekka Smekka
Great poem!! good flow with your words!!! excellent 5/5 :):) |