Comments : Sorry

  • 16 years ago

    by hope

    It's sad but a good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Emotional...well worded apology...sad...I hope if you wrote this for someone they accepted it and forgave you...with this,how could they not?wonderful!

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    Strong! Nicely done. The sorry's actually don't bother me, I thought they would because there are a lot of sorry's in this poem, but nope.. it didn't. So nice work
    5/5
    x

    [argh, stupid comment, I just like the poem =P ]

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    It flowed really well, and the emotions were clear. I could almost picture someone on their knees begging for forgiveness with this poem.
    It was very powerful.
    I enjoyed the repetition, and the mystery of what exactly your asking forgiveness for.

    Excellent,
    --Elly.

  • 16 years ago

    by kate

    This is really sad but well spoken.
    you did a great job of writing this.
    :]

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

  • 16 years ago

    by kate

    This is really sad but well spoken.
    you did a great job of writing this.
    :]

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    I rele love it!!! 5/5 great job! keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Aww so sad, emotional, but very cute same time. I hope that the person forgiven to you, this really shows how much you care. Touching!
    5/5 Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    That was so simple thoughts..and very well expressed

  • 16 years ago

    by Whitney

    Thanks for the comment..i love this poem...good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Whoa, I love it.
    I thought the 'sorry!" would be too much all those times; but I dig it. (:

    you've done a wonderful job with this, nojoke. It has great emotion, flow, and I liked your word choice.

    I love reptition, but usually not one word like that in the same place every line - but, boy you've got it downpat. Amazing job.

    I'm like stunned at how much I liked it.
    Lol.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This is deeply touching and filled with emotions, it sound so sincere, like it's written straight from the heart. Captivating poem, filled with equal amounts of sadness and beauty.
    It has good flow and nice rhyming scheme.
    Keep up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Not my faverit form of poem writing, But the poem was good. Keep writing. L. S. Moore

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Awe. the ending was beautiful.
    and the poem as a whole was simply amazing.
    and i like your rhyme scheme. :]
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by you will never forget me

    I love it! <3

  • 16 years ago

    by heartbreaker

    Wow!! i cant imagine the person you wrote this for. this poem might be short but its soo painful to read sorry every line. its like you are telling the reader, that you are a mistake. You are not! Dont ever feel that way. KEEP EXPRESSING! youre poems is like a high! :D sasha

  • 16 years ago

    by shamvi

    Simple and a nice way 2 tell sorry...

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystallovesmatt

    AMAZING! your such a talented writer!! keep writing or else i would have nothing to do on here so keep it up so i can read more!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Its so simple
    yet so meaningful
    love it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Great poem!! good flow with your words!!! excellent 5/5 :):)