Hey!!!!
David, how nice to see you posting again!
You are very right...we should all leave the bottle alone when we have to drive. I know from another friend in Oz punishments are severe when you get cought!
Your poem is beautiful, by the way.

Talk to you soon, my dear friend

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

I really liked it and its very true specially the bit bout leaving friends behind and all that kinda stuff

Hannah xx

This is a really good and true poem. especially about leaving friends behind. 5/5

im glad that your writing again, i have missed your poems a lot.

Kalee

First of all, I'd like to say that I hope this isn't written from personal experience.. it seems that way though> If it is, I'm terribly sorry for your loss.
Secondly, you haven't posted on here in a long time, I hope you do start again soon, lots of people miss it.
Thirdly, this is an excellent piece. Simple, yet exploding with emotion. The flow is good and you put a meaningful message and lesson in this as well as telling a story too.
Well done, David.

Good write and a great message. as a paramedic i can say that one percent does happen. all the best wishes ben thompson