This was a great poem it was full of so much emotion and you can tell that it must of been hard for you to write, great job it flowed really well through out x

Wow i loved every single word,it was great choice of words as it communicated the feeling thru the whole poem
great work,keep it up!:)

Nice job man, you really write well. Haha thanks for commenting on my poem yup you're right. 'imaginary' was my inspiration for that poem :) they're one of my fav. bands though i appreciate their earlier works better.