Fallen Angel

by StormyStar   Nov 29, 2007


Im a fallen angel
Wings black as night
I have no halo
I dont do right

Im an independent chick
I do what I want
I stand like a wall of brick
My hott body I flaunt

I been abused
Treated like $hit
Lights my fuse
Dont just sit

I cant stand you
Sick of the pain
Tired of you too
The blood that stain

Im a fallen angel
Wings black as night
I have no halo
I dont do right

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  • 16 years ago

    by 0oAshleyo0

    I like how you used a full circle ending in this... it makes it seem so much more... *cant think of the right word so add what you want here* lol
    great job!!!
    XxAshleyxX

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    This was really good. I loved the emotion u put into it. I also loved the repition of the first stanza in the end. great job kepp it up. 5/5
    ~Forever Broken~

  • 16 years ago

    by Cale

    Really good emotion!!! kinda dark but i really do like it great job!! cant wait to read more from u!!!!

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