Really good emotion!!! kinda dark but i really do like it great job!! cant wait to read more from u!!!!

This was really good. I loved the emotion u put into it. I also loved the repition of the first stanza in the end. great job kepp it up. 5/5
~Forever Broken~

I like how you used a full circle ending in this... it makes it seem so much more... *cant think of the right word so add what you want here* lol
great job!!!
XxAshleyxX