I'm not okay

by ECILA ice   Nov 29, 2007


I borrowed a smile from a dead clown
By ripping its tainted cold lips
And stitch it on my own
Just to make everyone believe I'm doing fine
Because I'm wearing that nice smile

I mundane cover my entire face
With an awful paint or cosmetics, whatever it is
Even if it was painted dreadfully, I don't care
Just to make them believe I'm alright
Because I look gorgeous with it

But what nobody knows,
I'm stuck in a holy underground
Digging myself up from where I stand.
I want to get out from this suffocating life
Because I'm no longer doing fine

** sorry about the content of this.. at the same time i'm having a bit of write's block.

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  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    It's a really good poem, but it has a couple of grammatical errors. Fix them and then it'll look great.

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Nice poem. i thought the clown thing was a lil creepy, but it worked out beautifully.

  • 16 years ago

    by Abu3li

    It's a nice poem. no writer's block is there coz it's beautiful

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    I thought the clown was a little random, but that just made me love it more.
    For having writters block, this poem was really well written.

    It a very enjoyable read,
    Keep it up,
    --Elly.

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    I really liked it for you to have writers block. I like the way you just kept it honest and used great emotion in your words. 5/5

    PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

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