by Always and Never Nov 29, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Promise me you won't forget me, |
I really liked this one! alot of emotion, im recently feeling this way =( |
by Ike Dizzle
Hey it's good where it is now. I like it. If you read it with passion it sounds like something you hear in a snapping club when people snap there fingers for a good poem. Yeah you end it on a dark note and everyone is snapping lol. Great poem |
by Neta
I really like your poem it has a lot of emotion into it as well the ryhming is perfect |
by gis
I love it!! |
by K3LS3Y
That was really good. i really liked it alot. i can relate cuz thats how i felt when me an my ex broke up. i hope your ok. good job. :-) |