That was really good. i really liked it alot. i can relate cuz thats how i felt when me an my ex broke up. i hope your ok. good job. :-)

I love it!!

I really like your poem it has a lot of emotion into it as well the ryhming is perfect
good job oh and totalle relatable

5/5

Hey it's good where it is now. I like it. If you read it with passion it sounds like something you hear in a snapping club when people snap there fingers for a good poem. Yeah you end it on a dark note and everyone is snapping lol. Great poem
-vino

I really liked this one! alot of emotion, im recently feeling this way =(