I love this piece from the beginning to the end. Truly greatly written poem, with flawless flow and creative descriptions. I like your choice of words and the vivid imagery that you created a lot.
I can't pick my favorite stanza, too many excellent ones.
The emotions are greatly expressed thorough the whole poem, too.
Amazing write!
Keep up!

Greatly expressed but some words were used a little too much like what Britt said and the sarcastic stuff is great to listen to it makes me want to keep reading
great flow
5/5

I love this poem! i like your use of vocab. ... i think alot of poems on this site are missing that... i like how you weaved words together and made it and interesting outcome... very nice... keep up the good workd.
mollie

This poem is excellent, i loved it =]
It has a very good flow and the choice of wording used was brilliant!
Great job

I luv diz poem! 5/5

Wow, brilliant poem. :D I loved it!

Wow great wrok,abit cynical but its very good imagery and good choice of words
i liked the word usage
great work

Wonderful enjoyed reading it