An apology I'll end Up Taking Back

by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child   Nov 29, 2007


It used to feel so special
When you tightly grasped my hand,
But now it's superficial
And I just dont understand.

I used to feel like treasure
When you gave me special names,
But now its lost its pleasure
And this state feels quite insane.

It used to feel so faultless
When embraces we exchanged,
But youve become so thoughtless
And now it just feels strange.

I used to feel so smitten
When we simply kissed goodbye,
But I now dont feel so "taken"
And I cant decipher why.

It used to feel so heated
When you wrapped me in your arms,
But that feeling has depleted
And its setting off alarms.

I used to feel so love-struck
When our fingers intertwined,
But youve left me looking dumb-struck
And its just so... never mind.

We used to feel like lovers
When I wanted nothing more,
But Im crying on my covers
And Im just not so sure.

I used to feel so happy
When you gave me butterflies,
But all this seems so crappy
And I must apologize.

Babe, this cant continue,
It just cannot go on,
I dont know whats with you,
so fix it for the next one.

I'm gone.

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  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    But that feeling has depleted
    And its setting off alarms.

    That was a great set of lines. The whole poem was great and it was hard to pick just one part that I enjoyed because I honestly enjoyed the whole thing.
    GREAT job!
    *ME*

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