DISTANT CRIES

by PoEtiCmYme   Nov 29, 2007


MY EMOTIONS WERE HIDDEN BENEATH THE TRUTH
A WHILE AGO SO I DINT HAVE TO FEEL THE THING'S I FEAR TO FEEL
OR RE LIVE MY OWN FOOTSTEPS AS IF A HALLOW SHADOW IN MY MOMENTS OF TORTURE

DISTANT MEMORIES HAUNT MY PRESENCE GHAUSTLING TRUTH'S OVER SHADOW MY UNKNOWN PAST
ALL I HAD WAS TAKEN FROM ME CAUSE YOU WERE MY EVERYTHING MY SOUL AND MY SALVATION

I WANT TO LAY DOWN AND DIE CAUSE MY HEART WON'T LET ME CRY

I HATE BECAUSE IN NO LONGER BY YOUR SIDE
I HATE CAUSE SHE IS RIGHT THERE NEXT TO YOU
AS YOU HOLD MY RHYTHM LESS HEART WHILST
I BLEED MY ENDLESS TEAR

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Great entrance ~

    MY EMOTIONS WERE HIDDEN BENEATH THE TRUTH
    A WHILE AGO SO I DINT HAVE TO FEEL THE THING'S I FEAR TO FEEL
    OR RE LIVE MY OWN FOOTSTEPS AS IF A HALLOW SHADOW IN MY MOMENTS OF TORTURE

    It's very climatic. 5/5, nice poem. Keep on writting.

  • 16 years ago

    by DeepLife

    I love it, its so full of emotion!
    The last Line is my fav.
    "I Bleed My Endless Tear"
    Its awesome!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Excellent poem. so much feeling and deapth

  • 16 years ago

    by dancing in the dark

    This was really good :)
    4/5 =D
    keep writing you have alot of potental :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    I loved that one i feel the same at the moment :[

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