A very powerful piece you wrote here, hun. I was really moved by it. I love reading poems about real issues like this, well they aren't happy, but it's good to see that someone cares enough to write about such a raw issue.
This flows so well, and you brought out a lot of emotion throughout this. A very strong ending, which is so brutely true.
Excellent piece. :]
5/5

Love,
Tammie. x