Without Your Love

Luanne
i absolutely Loved THIS POEM,great work hun
you write amazingly and i just thought i should let you know that!
take care:)
-Lisa

Luanne...this so sad and beautiful.....I love the sentiments within and the amazing word choices a n flow of the verses....

"Stitched together with fraying thread
when needing you most, left
heart bleeding upon a burning bed
without your love, there is no us

Regret may fill YOUR days soon
for words spoken, go unheard
rainy days and cloud covered moon
will nestle painfully in your heart"

^ I absolutely love these verses.....how true....for those we love sometimes take that love for granted and let it slip away.....then regret it when it's too late.....you have done an amzing job on this one....well done!!!!

Take care, Debbie

Stitched together with fraying thread
when needing you most, left
heart bleeding upon a burning bed
without your love, there is no us

When you are the only one fighting...it is a lost battle all together...

Regret may fill YOUR days soon
for words spoken, go unheard
rainy days and cloud covered moon
will nestle painfully in your heart

They usually feel regret after a while..when it's too late anyway...

Such a sad poem Luanne...I feel for you, I really do.
I hope you win the contest, your poem is very beautiful.

all the best,

*hugs*

Ingrid