Comments : Without Your Love

  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Stitched together with fraying thread
    when needing you most, left
    heart bleeding upon a burning bed
    without your love, there is no us

    When you are the only one fighting...it is a lost battle all together...

    Regret may fill YOUR days soon
    for words spoken, go unheard
    rainy days and cloud covered moon
    will nestle painfully in your heart

    They usually feel regret after a while..when it's too late anyway...

    Such a sad poem Luanne...I feel for you, I really do.
    I hope you win the contest, your poem is very beautiful.

    all the best,

    *hugs*

    Ingrid

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Luanne...this so sad and beautiful.....I love the sentiments within and the amazing word choices a n flow of the verses....

    "Stitched together with fraying thread
    when needing you most, left
    heart bleeding upon a burning bed
    without your love, there is no us

    Regret may fill YOUR days soon
    for words spoken, go unheard
    rainy days and cloud covered moon
    will nestle painfully in your heart"

    ^ I absolutely love these verses.....how true....for those we love sometimes take that love for granted and let it slip away.....then regret it when it's too late.....you have done an amzing job on this one....well done!!!!

    Take care, Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Lisa

    Luanne
    i absolutely Loved THIS POEM,great work hun
    you write amazingly and i just thought i should let you know that!
    take care:)
    -Lisa