LIFE

by PoEtiCmYme   Nov 29, 2007


WE AWAKE TO THE DISTRACTIONS OF THIS WORLD
ONLY TO ENDURE MORE PAIN AND HURT
PAIN THAT BEGIN WITH A SMILE
TO END IN TEARS

DO YOU EVER TAKE A QUICK GLIMPSE AROUND
ONLY TO NOTICE LIFE HAS PASSED YOU BY
I DONT KNOW WHO I AM
AS I'M JUST A LIL GIRL FIGHTING
FOR A LIFE ALREADY LOST

ALL THAT SEEMS CLEAR IS
I'M JUST ANOTHER LIL GIRL
YOUNG ENOUGH TO FIND LIFE A MYSTERY
BUT
OLD ENOUGH TO KNOW LIFE'S UNPREDICTABLE PATHS AND CHOICES

I'M JUST ANOTHER LIFE CORRUPTED
ANOTHER SOUL DOOMED IN THE WORLD OF PAIN
ANOTHER HUMAN WITHOUT HOPE FOR SALVATION

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  • 16 years ago

    by Litemc

    So sad. Interesting to read this poem after let say 10 years: OLD ENOUGH TO KNOW LIFE'S UNPREDICTABLE PATHS AND CHOICES. Great contrast. Great poem. It is so understandable for me. In fact i pass more like same period of life.

    As a continuation I found it on inet probably the same approach: How many times do we have to come here to realize that we shouldn't? To stop the pain of this world we have to stop coming here, abandon this existence. Reject your return.

    Anyway life's worth living. Otherwise how could I ever read your poem. Keep it up and breath.

  • 16 years ago

    by Litemc

    Why, why the life is lost for you lil girl? The fact is, that this poem is the one which gives hope for your salvation. Actually such a beautiful mind which produces such mean full words is you salvation, and definitely save those who read and understands your words. Keep up. I want salvation and can get it reading your poems.

  • 16 years ago

    by Big hersh

    Good write

  • 16 years ago

    by L3AH

    I think everyone can relate to this it is really good!

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Great poem. heaps o' feeling

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