by neo
Great poem. heaps o' feeling |
by L3AH
I think everyone can relate to this it is really good! |
by Big hersh
Good write |
by Litemc
Why, why the life is lost for you lil girl? The fact is, that this poem is the one which gives hope for your salvation. Actually such a beautiful mind which produces such mean full words is you salvation, and definitely save those who read and understands your words. Keep up. I want salvation and can get it reading your poems. |
by Litemc
So sad. Interesting to read this poem after let say 10 years: OLD ENOUGH TO KNOW LIFE'S UNPREDICTABLE PATHS AND CHOICES. Great contrast. Great poem. It is so understandable for me. In fact i pass more like same period of life. |