Comments : LIFE

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Great poem. heaps o' feeling

  • 16 years ago

    by L3AH

    I think everyone can relate to this it is really good!

  • 16 years ago

    by Big hersh

    Good write

  • 16 years ago

    by Litemc

    Why, why the life is lost for you lil girl? The fact is, that this poem is the one which gives hope for your salvation. Actually such a beautiful mind which produces such mean full words is you salvation, and definitely save those who read and understands your words. Keep up. I want salvation and can get it reading your poems.

  • 16 years ago

    by Litemc

    So sad. Interesting to read this poem after let say 10 years: OLD ENOUGH TO KNOW LIFE'S UNPREDICTABLE PATHS AND CHOICES. Great contrast. Great poem. It is so understandable for me. In fact i pass more like same period of life.

    As a continuation I found it on inet probably the same approach: How many times do we have to come here to realize that we shouldn't? To stop the pain of this world we have to stop coming here, abandon this existence. Reject your return.

    Anyway life's worth living. Otherwise how could I ever read your poem. Keep it up and breath.