Your an addiction that I cant seem to end.
My first class seat to failure.
My heart is on a string.
And you're the puppet master
You know that you kill me inside,
And you just bring me back with your illusion,
Of supposed love......
Your antics never cease to amaze me,
Your a work of art that cant be repeated.
Am I just a chick on your side?
Or am I really your only one?
You try to assure me your love is true...
The hardest part is trusting you...
Tear me open and take my heart,
Numb me with morphine,
I wont scream or shout...
Just take what you want and leave...
The deadliest thing you could do......
Is say " I love you"
The most suicidal thing i can do.....
Is beleive you...
Absolutely Amazing!
This one is by far the best poem of yours that I have read. The emotion and flow were perfect. I can totaly relate to this one right now.
"The deadliest thing you could do......
Is say " I love you"
The most suicidal thing i can do.....
Is beleive you..."
^^fav stanza. the last two lines did it for me tho =]
Overall, perfectly and beautifully written
Very good job
5/5