Comments : Razor Sharp Words

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    Absolutely Amazing!
    This one is by far the best poem of yours that I have read. The emotion and flow were perfect. I can totaly relate to this one right now.

    "The deadliest thing you could do......
    Is say " I love you"
    The most suicidal thing i can do.....
    Is beleive you..."
    ^^fav stanza. the last two lines did it for me tho =]

    Overall, perfectly and beautifully written
    Very good job
    5/5

    xxPaSsIoNaTe kIsSeSxx