Unknown

by pookiengurgi   Nov 29, 2007


There's something she's hiding
So you don't know it's there
She just keeps on lying
Don't everyone stare
Can't hold her head high
Because she knows if it's true
There's a chance she could die
Before her life's lived through
Shouldn't shake your heads too hard
Try your best not to whisper
Most people nowadays have gone just as far
Gossip,and later you could learn
you might be her
Unknown to everybody
who all it's affected
Misunderstood,misled,and distrust
How was she to know
One guy-one mistake-could change her life
from fire
to ashes
to dust

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    What I am reading is that one guy made her ill...am I right?
    Good flow, well done, dear!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    : ) i loved it!!!! it had a good sense of mystery where you kept me reading just to know the ending of it you did an amazzin job hunny 5/5 keep up the great work! <33

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    Very nice flow to it and very detailed you definatly deserve a 5 not a 4....brilliant job

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I don't see why this got a 4. You were very detailed, descriptive and direct with your writing. It had an amazing flow. I can't even describe it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by you will never forget me

    This is really good. =] I absolutely lurrvveedd it. <3

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