New Love

by KJ   Nov 29, 2007


This love is a new experience for me
Please be mindful of the fact that its scary.
Not scary as in fear, but scary as in different,
This is the first time that I cared so much about one's opinion.
I'm really trying my hardest to express my true emotions;
I want you to know that you have all of my love and devotion.
I want to give myself to you completely, not just half;
I know I tell you, but I want to SHOW you just how bad...
How bad that I long to be with you.
I think about and appreciate all the "little big" things you do.
You make me feel as if I have the greatest blessing that God could give.
I will cherish you always, you're the reason that I live.
Without you, my heart would be a black void.
Empty and waiting for light to bring joy....
You are my light; my heart and my happiness ;
I love you so much, more than words can express.

*PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS*

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ken

    I loved tis poem cause it was good and it had the same name as one of mine lol. i also loved lines 6 and seven.

    GREAT JOB! 5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by StuPiD FrEaK

    It's a very nice poem and I admit that you are really good in showing and putting your emotions in a poem! You should keep on writing poems! They are really great!

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Beautiful you got great talent dont ever stop writting 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A beautiful poem. and you really captured
    the sincereness [i dont think thatz a word. lol]
    in this piece. a very sweet write. :]
    another great job. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    This was a cute poem. I love the emotion in this and imagery in this was great and the flow fit just right. Although, the structure in this didn't fit right. Other than that, it's great. I'll still rate a 5/5.

    .:CiNdY:.

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