Really great and it flowed well you didnt use words that rhymed automatically but you made them rhyme with each other the way you worded it...great 5/5

This poem comprises sweet thought and own experience with simple words that helps readers comprehend it easily and somehow relate themselves..

Wow this was just beautiful. It all flowed together flawlessly and it felt as if someone one rapping to me which made it different and enjoyable to read. The emotions were real and ones I could relate with. Well done *5/5*

I rele liiike the flow of this poem...niice work!!

Beautiful! You can express how you feel so perfectly and coming from deep inside, so touching and many readers can relate to it.
Amazing work on it! Flow was flawless!
5/5 Keep writing

Again peutiful poem. and again one i can relate too...

my fav lines are

~I'm really trying my hardest to express my true emotions;
I want you to know that you have all of my love and devotion~

i'm not sure why tho. but yes i really like this one aswell

another 5/5

This was a cute poem. I love the emotion in this and imagery in this was great and the flow fit just right. Although, the structure in this didn't fit right. Other than that, it's great. I'll still rate a 5/5.

.:CiNdY:.

A beautiful poem. and you really captured
the sincereness [i dont think thatz a word. lol]
in this piece. a very sweet write. :]
another great job. 5/5.

Beautiful you got great talent dont ever stop writting 5/5

It's a very nice poem and I admit that you are really good in showing and putting your emotions in a poem! You should keep on writing poems! They are really great!

I loved tis poem cause it was good and it had the same name as one of mine lol. i also loved lines 6 and seven.

GREAT JOB! 5/5*