Very touchable poem, i can feel the pain... i started to like sad poems more and more these days i don't know why hehe

How very sad and heartbreaking Ingrid....I can feel the tears and pain in every line.....goodbyes are so very painful....hope time soon heals....Take care, Debbie

Sorry, if this was me gosh i am so sorry, i was a bast*#d wasn't i?

5/5 David

How can you make a heart rest , while he si designed to love every more everyday ,

how can one take the pain from his heart and let is rest ,

how can you turn a tear into words to put in a reply to his decieving words?

you esxpressed a beautifull feelings , pure and noble ,
and shown how he was soo careles to this gift yhou give him ,

i think it is the best one i can feel your feligns in it so far !!!

the flow is good and the toehrs are sjut natural process for you !
great poem