by Crystal Gaze Dec 13, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
A Cloud OF Tortured Dreams. |
by Blissful
Wow the emotions you expressed here were so deep and captivating. I just adored the story you told me because it was filled with meaning and power. Nice choice of words to describe the events. Well done *5/5* |
by Mister 47
Well yeah it look more a story then a poem , but i like the chain of event and expressions |
Wow amazing ending |
The structure here seemed to be off, and for this poem, I don't think it worked as well in comparison to your other one. However, I did really like the strong emotion created in this piece. |
by Kaila
Again I don't see a structure here really at all. I think it would be nice if you added short story because most people think it's a poem and in my opinion it doesn't have the structure to fit the poem criteria. |