Again you mirror some of the feeling I have in this piece you made. I really like the part were you said...

I still remember that night when you called up drunk
Dint believe how you wanted me back
Dint hear how hard you cried
Dint see how u died that night
Now I let her took my place
Left you when you needed me the most

I truely wish that when I told the girl I used to love that I felt the way I did about her that she would have chosen me. Instead she is out doing her thing and I am the one stuck in the friend zone with no escape.

I loved this. it lost me at some parts, but yet it all made scence. Honestly brought tears to my eyes, keep it up=]

Great poem.
i can relate.
thanks for the comment.
tc

I have read alot of poems here that talk about looking in peoples eyes. you mention see unhappiness in his eyes. that is so powerful to me. the eyes tell so much. that really got to me.

Wow, this poem is one of the highest standard poems..too much emotions too much feelings

good job,

wish you the best

This brought tears to my eyes. It's almost as if I'm seeing another side of you, my sweet big sister. :-) And I love that side. I love the woman you've become. And any man on God's green earth is so breathlessly lucky to have you. <3