This is really good but I wish it was longer ;)

I like how u described how much u love that person
~best hopes and wishes~

Awww so short but right to the point.. those simple lines could mean the world to a person.. very nice job. very creative.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =)

This is such a short poem but so cute and nice, i liked it. 4/5

Short yet cute and romantic

this poem should be in "love" section but i guess you had a fight with your guy so you wrote this one...

LMAO @Kerry...Muahzz..

Um this is cute but i dont think that its sad??
5/5

I loved this! :-) Powerful imagery, and powerful sentiments, all summed up in so little words, but mean a great deal. Amazing what we can do with words. :)