Jane i love this poem a lot..it's flowing in a flawless way.. tho it's not a love poem but I had this smooching Feeling!

I love the way u repeated Sweet Jane..ir gave this sweet humor for the poem..but still the poem was thought provoking and was wishful !

some expressions were really expressed very well that I was able to see u walking between the grass and bla bla..

I hope the roads she took in life, gave her satisfaction.
sweet jane sweet jane..oh sweet five out of five

Smoochy*